The cloud and the grass redux on video

Ive been playing with Videoscribe, a nice tool for  creating whiteboard videos. As an exercise I set myself the task of video-fying The Cloud and the Grass, a business fable I wrote a while ago:
 
 
Id greatly appreciate your feedback. Please be gentle though, this is a first attempt :-)
PS: Ive just realised this is the shortest post Ive ever written.
